Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose a career path they like. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely admissible that children should not be imposed on which career path they are going to follow. Some parents do not agree with this opinion due to the fact that they know their children best. However, I totally believe that it is student's freedom to decide their own college majors and occupational choices.
To begin with, various teenagers have distinctive abilities. A number of them may have a head for numbers, statistics or figures, on the contrary others can be good at drawing, singing or dancing. Sometimes these aptitudes happen to appear at an early age among juveniles, for most cases they are not instantly recognizable though until they enter high schools. With busy work schedules, parents barely have time to pay much attention to their children, therefore, it is only the children who know explicitly about their strengths and weaknesses. Furthermore, parents are frequently affected by old-fashioned conceptions, especially those coming from Asian countries like China, Korea, Vietnam or Japan. They want their offspring to fit the conventional stereotype of a doctor, a teacher or an engineer. This will have an adverse effect on the teenagers in light of the fact that not everyone is cut out for these careers, they can end up becoming insecure about themselves. Each individual has a field that they are confident in and only them will know what their potentials and values are.
Besides, every child has its own interest and passion. Doing something you like is always more inspiring and appealing than something you dislike. Consistency is a key to success, consequently if someone feels unmotivated about the vocations they are doing, how can they stick to it and give their best performance? A recent survey has shown that over 30 percent of workers in the US left their current office as they want to start over with their favorite ones. This is a wake-up call for all parents as jumping from one job to another is not ideal since anyone can possibly lose the perfect opportunity to move up the career ladder.
In conclusion, I would say desire and talent play a crucial role in everyone's success. That’s why every father and mother ought to be more open-minded and accept their children’s choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01604278075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70467200425 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622994652406 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6267354478 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244572050174 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688078385822 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533930867681 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143102333075 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775159465059 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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