In the past, the majority of people lived in small communities where grandparents came from. However, now most people tent to live in big cities. As a result, people lifestyle has changed. There were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small village.
I believe there were there mains benefits. Firstly, the small villages had better environment with fresh weather, fresh food and clean water than the large cities. As a consequence, living in there was good for people’s health. Secondly, everyone knew everyone else and, in the village they were born, people often connected and help...
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Andi Alamsyah
Essay Categories
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212624584718 0.247107548796 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.162790697674 0.15552993741 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106312292359 0.0946569551029 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0764119601329 0.0501201869031 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0365448504983 0.0437536398559 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102990033223 0.122223957237 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0299003322259 0.0403219363162 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46377270581 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0132890365449 0.0326786765898 41% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0897009966777 0.0861751148067 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00332225913621 0.0214082191602 16% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00664451827243 0.0119246538136 56% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1509.0 1933.38276553 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 316.052104208 83% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71590909091 6.10592293882 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20519365927 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292775665399 0.37474360046 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190114068441 0.284197041944 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144486692015 0.203843217982 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0798479087452 0.137313986986 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46377270581 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.560935902166 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.384568513 60.7401812628 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0911823647 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4705882353 20.7725350517 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8613996241 49.5273876611 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6178571429 93.4120437189 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9678571429 15.2821509519 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.594174754866 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 34.4819950794 49.1922392462 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.25301204819 1.69127372897 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.54612111758 0.332604825255 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0558579696627 0.102734651613 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694536983613 0.0668474354756 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46377182547 0.534917948617 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150775479499 0.148666948902 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201390891549 0.13441755203 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120453569332 0.0742828286743 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341997240915 0.324241079732 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0890867120336 0.0640056729886 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.396190791447 0.22793763319 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11174797522 0.0582452615562 192% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.88977955912 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.00200400802 150% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.493987976 133% => OK
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9