As we know in our old days the technology has not developed as of now. Many people used to travel to their offices to do their work and it is increased the productivity. Internet and smartphones are increased exponentially, where all people are used to use smartphone and the internet. The work is easily being done on internet in the cell phones. The internet and the cell phones made humans work easier, the people are doing work at anywhere in the world using internet.
In earlier days people are used to go to office but when the new technology has arrived and people get used to it and saving the travelling time and doing the work atmost and utilizing each and every second productiviely. There is new technology arrving generation to generation. By increaing in computers and smartphones employment rate is increased and many people utilizing the technologies and increasing their financial stability. As the coin as two sides there are good things and bad things of computers and smartphones. The advantage is the people are adapting new technology as it is good to nation but as well as it should be eco-friendly and it should not cause any damage to nature and mankind. These computers and smartphones releases radiation which are harmfull to humans and animals present in our nature.
Using the technology eco-friendly and productiviely then only we can achieve may more with out disturbing the nature.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: atefeh asadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...viely then only we can achieve may more with out disturbing the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, second, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92887029289 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89506491911 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497907949791 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5691689855 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41438578827 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144520393842 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11351348399 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255598066788 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121074670045 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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