In the past people believe that the human race steadily making progress in all areas of life and there is a less certainty that it is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas a more need to be done?
The journey of human beings from forest survival to flying by aeroplane depicts the success of mankind over a century. Presently, increasingly technological development is satisfying all needs of human beings in every walk of life. However, there are some areas required to be more invent to curtail global menaces. Here, I would like to throw light on stupendous development's so for and and needed inventions for upcoming generation.
The most magnificient invention is, the introduction of aeroplanes which revolutionised the trade, travelling and create good relations with other nations. To elucidate, in this contemporary Epoch, people are seeking for employment, education and business purposes in other parts of the word because of this invention. Therefore, the invention of aeroplane is terrific. Moreover, internet becomes a part and parcel of everyone's life and it not only turning the whole word into global village but also provides a great deal of amusement to folks. Besides this, the invention of nuclear power, computer, medicines, cardiac operation and cell phones are top notch developments of human beings. Yet some inventions needed to cope up with current threats.
Initially, there is a dire need to evolve alternatives of petrol and diesel to reduce the problem of air pollution. Adding to it, some chemicals and purifiers should be needed toinvent so that it becomes possible to purify the polluted water for irrigation and animals. Consequently, it reduces the scarcity of water. Furthermore, it is wise to look for a life sustainable planets in order to to keep into consideration the problem of accommodation on account of burgeoning population.
To recapitulate, undeniably, myraid miracles witnessed the bravery of human beings as it is well said that "necessity is the mother of invention". However, I still believe that there is need to bring some more inventions to curb thecurrent happenings at large extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: top-notch
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Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16410082415 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7643762984 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142870113754 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433615012266 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039935243182 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868133747117 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05259185676 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.