In the past people used their free time more better as compared to today s To what extend do you agree or disagree

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In the past people used their free time more better as compared to today's. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

In today's time it is very difficult to get free time .Because of this forward world.So I strongly disagree with the statement but also cannot neglect the former one .

In the past years people used to do many exercises and yoga to stay fit and healthy. They use their free time to walk through the market or to go temple. Notably in past time people also like read books in free time because of which very good knowledge about natural medicine and religious events. The get such time because there were no such works to do at that time.

As compared with today's time people are so busy in their work that they don't even has a free time. Because of developing world, in some of the jobs people had to do full time jobs. So in free time they like to sleep or to relax and they don't do any extra activity like in past.

Now a days people also don't like to go outside because this increasing pollution which leads to harmful disease like heart problems,asthma etc. In today's time people are some greedy that for high wages they do full time jobs.

To conclude people of now a day use there free time not to do something new or to learn. Ad in past people have time which they use in better way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3185840708 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08844957112 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7846508802 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376878881433 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171061810347 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669893588543 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236347275029 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076634010779 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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