In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Years ago, those who were studying at a higher education, inclined to conquer knowledge in their hometown. Over time, by virtue of lots of developments in present-day world, they have chances to study in another nation. Personally, I strongly believe that the benefits of this enhancement outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin with, regarding positive aspect of studying in a strange country, many students have been experienced new world with countless extraordinary things. In fact, they are provided up-to-day transmission of knowledge and facilities, which are useful for their studies, or even broadened their horizons through witnessing and accessing to a huge range of different learnings on top of their intellection in determined disciplines. Accordingly, these students will become smarter, as well as are more likely to devote and contribute greatly to their own father land by taking advantage of in-depth knowledge and skills that they have been acquired and schooled. Additionally, students overseas can integral and make a wide circle of acquaintance in search of disparate cultures and customs from dissimilar individuals. From there, they would be zealous, open-hearted, as well as simultaneously gain more experiences with a view to developing themselves.
Nevertheless, since college students have already been familiar with their traditions and habits on a regular and long-term basis, adapting to a strange location is difficult, which means culture shock. For instance, Westerners frequently give a quick kiss and huge to each other when it comes to meeting face-to-face, yet Asians may consider it an impolite and rude behavior when they study in Europe. Moreover, language barrier might be a challenging problem they have to overcome, as their mother tongue has anything common with foreign language. As a result, expressing ideas and transmitting words are difficult when it comes to communicating and interacting with people.
To sum up, living and graduating from overseas are both has helpfulnesses and disadvantages with those aforementioned grounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61980830671 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15629728267 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648562300319 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6247361013 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293156726852 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885696724643 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509332690741 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150825072469 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759494910634 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.