Years ago, when students took a university degree, they be apt to learn in their hometown. In a moment, students who have more favorable circumstances to study in transit, use them. Personally, I strongly believe that the benefits of this intensification dominate the drawbacks.
To begin with, regarding positive aspect of studying in a foregin country, a lot of students have been experienced new world with countless extraordinary things. Therefore, they may meet with new friends, improve own horizons. In fact, they are provided up-to-day transmission of knowledge and facilities, which are useful for their studies. Accordingly, this students will become smarter, as well as are more likely to devote and taking more good knowledge then their father land. Additionally, students learn be independent more then they was been, and this is very good, becouse when they will be independent then they will be learn earn for themselves.
Nevertheless, since college students have already been familiar with their traditions and habits on a regular and long-term basis, adapting to a strange location is difficult, which means culture shock. So, students who study on aboard do not meet and do converstation with their family and friends face-to-face. Unfortunetely, they are not take place in some activities, and close birthday parties. If someone close will be ill, they cannot be with them, and if someone close of hometown is in bad situation, students cannot help them.
In my opinion, living and graduating in foregin countries are have more advantages then disanvantages with this aforementioned grounds. I would advise if there is an opportunity to study in foregin countries, then take the opportunity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05727000162 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.237585248 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314215318329 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105996676719 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443142129514 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198542680358 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498928498146 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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