Nowadays people are being more concerned about the study and career. Importance of education has been increasing gradually with technological advancement and globalization. Students have many facilities for education as compare to ancient time. Now they can go foreign countries for university degree. This phenomenon has both positive and negative effects.
Let we discuss both in this essay.
In today's era, students have various ways to study in abroad. Many countries have reputed colleges so student can get good experience of learning. They must live alone in other country therefore they become able to stay alone and take care of self. They come to contact with new people and cultures of host country therefore they learn new culture and language. There are many good job opportunities and high standard life available in developed countries because of that pupils have settled over there.
On the other hand, studying in overseas country has many disadvantages too. First, cost of education is very high as compare to our country. Second, students must leave alone and adjust in new culture and with new people which is problem for many homesick person. Third, it is major loss for students own country because many of them will be settle there after completing study. Many students come under influence of host countries culture and develop bias and get distract from his own culture.
To conclude, according to my view it is personal decision of student of parents for study in home country or abroad but they must consider the financial condition of own. Advantages of studying in overseas outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21590909091 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.652897367 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7578927887 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240031250437 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782161130872 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482911868939 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135049456094 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603291995177 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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