Due to modernization and technological advancement in medical field mortality rate is decrease. Many serious illness have been cured nowadays and many of them are eradicated by use of prior vaccination. One group of mass assume that more issues have developed by increase population while other presume that it is useful for boost world's and society's economy.
Let we discuss meritd and demerits of both point on following paragraphs.
First of all, over population is burning issue for many underdeveloped and undeveloped countries. There are number of people died per year due to starvation and lack of basic needs. Government must spend more money to overcome basic needs of people like food, clothing and accommodation leads to burden on the government. If basic need of human can not complete they turn towards the crime to complete it which ultimately raise theft, robbery, snatching etcetera.
For instance public in many African countries are living in dirty places due to lack of basic facilities.
On the other hand, excess in human being generate more man power. By using these manpower we can build industries and it will help to improve the economy of the world. Moreover, more minds will work to solve a problem to develop a new technology. This mean any kind of development in the society as well as in the world will be more faster than less population, As it is said two are better than one and three are better than two. With proper use of new technology they can solve the issues which is created by overpopulation.
To conclude, according to my point of view demerits out weigh the merits. So, government should give proper attention towards the issues as well as basic needs of people. They can solve the problems by using newer technology and by educating the people.
- Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 11
- You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to you manager. 73
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.In your letter 70
- The increase in population may lead to global crisis. Some people say that it is necessary for economic development of the world and society. Discuss your opinion. 84
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.What are the reasons for this behavior?What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this manpower' or 'these manpowers'?
Suggestion: this manpower; these manpowers
...being generate more man power. By using these manpower we can build industries and it will hel...
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Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...society as well as in the world will be more faster than less population, As it is said two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94389438944 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71373838856 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.503501206 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1176470588 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108422005108 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312635027275 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401759978739 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502052129593 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312465393961 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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