It is universal truth that earlier student did their higher education in their own country but now due to globalisation students have a lot of opportunities to go foreign countries for their further study as well as universities degree is very crucial for everyone because it's the basic need for people to start their career. Now this essay will discuss about negative and positive effects of this statement in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand if students go abroad for higher education they can interact with different kinds of person and learn about the culture tradition and language. Moreover, they can become more strong in order to survive anywhere in the world as well as student can learn personal skills also apart from study like how to do household work for an instance by virtue in hensing students to go Overseas in order to study in the western countries Japan now has become one of the leading country in Technology Sector.
On the other hand is negative side regionalized that firstly student can face adversities for surviving in new country as well as student tuition fee and University fee are more in Abroad which some students are not afford moreover students cannot make their friends easily because they do not have proper knowledge of that tradition and culture as well as they can hardly see their family like once a year.
To conclude I personally believe that if students choose abroad for their higher education it is more benefited for their bright future after that it helps to do any business in the world anywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...e in Abroad which some students are not afford moreover students cannot make their fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89056603774 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52134780053 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.605986252 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.0 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239018331842 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116792998363 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518958235897 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146659191912 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403439509103 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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