people aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives,but few people achieve it what are the causes of the problems,How to overcomes.
It is unquestionable true that today life is very tough competition balances difference work through live lifestyle.The root can that some offspring consider that some masses achieve their goals in their life.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue that multiheads.There most predominant in few years technology is very fast.Hence,in couple of month everyone has using plethora electronic devices.For instances,
cell phone,laptop,tablets,
computer and so on.Moving on this drawback,there are causing a lot of harmful of kids because they would addicted on internet.After than,they have umpteen time killing on website.Furthere,they could not
consciousness about their career.
Moving on this few dweller success their work instead of lives,there are no denying that fact the,First of all who have youngster they always giving hundred proportion in their work for whole life.Otherwise,
they must interest any activities.For example,
study,international games,functions,office work,industry line and extra.Lastly but not the least,they can easily handle their personal and professional life. However, they might achieve everything as well as they want it.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand they adolescent could not awareness that's that study.On other hand,why's that adults would not balance between their life and passion.Thus,youth should force their aim than they might equal balances it .
- In many places the role of mother and father are changing It is positive and negative development 65
- school children are becoming far too dependent on computer .This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills.Teachers needs to avoid using computer in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.Do you agree or dis 84
- Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult?Task what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language?what is the best way to overcome them. 56
- These days more fathers stay at home & take care of their children.while mothers go out to work.Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93665158371 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74603651161 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.790700692 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.4 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.2 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.4 7.06120827912 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161947671596 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885281866832 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273707583025 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590670212949 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472521135291 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.06 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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