Nowadays, establishment of work/life balance has become a serious problem for employees, failing most of them in the issue. To account for this problem, there are possible sources and adequate solutions which will be discussed in the essay.
To start with causes, the main thing that brings down the balance between the work and life is the low productivity of workers. Not being professional or skilled enough to accomplish tasks until deadlines makes employees spend more time on them. Thereby, they cannot focus much on their leisure activities and family life which is crucial for employees to have enough rest. Furthermore, the high level of stress created by lack of relaxation doubles the chance of lower work output. Hence, the rate of productivity of people seems to impede the accomplishment of their tasks in time, which, in turn, persuade them to disturb the equilibrium between work and life.
Regarding the solutions, employers can possibly help the employees to resolve this issue by looking after improvements of their work experience. In other words, they should create a chance for workers to enhance their skills and professionality, that will effectively increase the work rate. The feasible step which can be taken by an employer is to subsidize training courses such as on the job training or day release programs. Since these will make employees learn more about their profession and increase their experience, they will be able to work more efficiently and meet the deadlines readily. In addition to enhancement of skills, employers may also motivate them to work productively by paying increments, perks and some other financial rewards. Eventually, both of these solutions are effective for individuals to manage their work life easily, conserving the right balance between work and life.
To conclude, it has been claimed that most of the people fail to allocate the time for work and life evenly because their lack of experience does not let them to finish their tasks in time. Nevertheless, employers can assist them to solve the problem either by spending money on training courses to improve their skills, or motivate them with suitable incentives. As a result, workers can handle the time management in workplace and focus on their families and free time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
.... Regarding the solutions, employers can possibly help the employees to resolve this issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19137466307 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75094556186 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2418767874 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.375 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172629994732 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627437209496 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456384240949 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112280696464 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144230520019 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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