People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?
It is true that drinks containing sugars have gained increasing popularity among people, especially young children. While there are some underlying motives regarding this problem, I believe we can take steps to mitigate it.
There are two main reasons why there is a dramatic increase in the number of people having the habit of choosing sugar-based beverages. Firstly, as the advertising industry has developed at an unprecedented rate, citizens can easily get access to advertisements introducing a variety of sweet drinks and be attracted by promotions companies manufacturing sugar-based drinks offer. For example, Pepsi has been extremely successful in drawing the attention of consumers as its products are advertised everywhere, from streets to supermarkets. Secondly, it is undoubted that sugars that contain high levels of carbohydrates can make people feel much more refreshed and energetic, especially after they finish doing something physically demanding. This encourages people to pay for a sugar-contained drink rather than a bottle of water whenever they feel thirsty.
However, there are some actions that both government bodies and ordinary citizens can take to ameliorate this alarming issue. Firstly, governments should impose high taxes on these beverages so that manufacturers will take producing these harmful drinks on a large scale into consideration and buyers will hesitate to choose a sugary drink due to paying extra money for high taxes. Secondly, parents should control their children's buying habits in order to prevent them from spending too much on drinks containing high levels of sugars.
Overall, it can be concluded that the popularity of sugary beverages is mainly due to attractive advertisements and the benefits they bring to human energy, but there are still some measures that have the potential of tackling this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57543859649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98706764226 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1363445538 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.454545455 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186439314709 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700522300405 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653937855442 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969638365824 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822799506171 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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