People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Today, it is acknowledged the fact that enhancing knowledge is one of the essential things in this society. People primarily prefer studying tertiary education to prepare for their career path or they want to have profound influences on social hierarchies. I concur that raising understanding is a rewarding job.
To begin with, learning in universities or colleges can help students have quality backgrounds. In fact, these tertiary education offer them new knowledge as well as experiences and providing them with various skills that useful in the future. Also, higher education now is in pursuit of producing excellent students because they have measures to assess across a range of abilities to prepare for student's occupations. To be more precise, relating to communication, for example, dissertation, undergraduates can raise their knowledge about how to manage their time, study, and their speech. Besides, if the problems occur, say, conflict in groups, students would learn how to tackle issues and convey their ideas toward others.
On the other hand, higher education is not always the best choice. In other words, some theoretical concepts are not suitable for the reality of day-to-day work because of practical applications. For example, in Viet Nam, Marxism is compulsory for every student who learns in the universities' state school. Consequently, most of the students' job does not involve in a political career, it is utterly waste of their time, energy, and money. Seemingly, there are still an immense amount of people who come to fruition in their particular fields without attending universities or colleges. That is to say, and there are various ways to achieve successful divergent ends.
To recapitulate, although students nowadays tend to attend tertiary education to have a bright future, they should not concentrate too much on it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... applications. For example, in Viet Nam, Marxism is compulsory for every student ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, in fact, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26821192053 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87939564109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2655001511 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221522647045 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691650148922 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680002863225 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123425639655 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508772780157 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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