People believe that air travel should be restricted because it cause serious pollution and used up the world’s fuel resources.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a belief that restriction should be put on air flight due to its adverse impacts on the environment such as causing pollution and consuming a great amount of fuel. Personally, although I admit that air travel do harm to our environment, i still hold the view that the use of airplane should not be limited because of its huge advantages.
The first benefit of air travel is that it enables intercultural exchange. The advent of planes makes it possible for people to travel to many continents across the globe with the fastest movement among all kinds of transportation. As a result, people have opportunities to learn from different cultures and have better understanding of the countries they are not familiar with,and also introduce their own countries’ culture and tradition to foreigners, which consequently helps break the cross-cultural barrier between nations in the world.
Improving international tourism is another positive impact of aviation. In other words, air travel is the main factor attracting foreign visitors, contributing to the developments of the economies. This is because unlike other transportations like ships which takes travellers about one week to get the destinations, airplanes enable people to get the same place just within one day so as a result they will choose planes to speed up the time travelling and reach the destinations as soon as possible.
Some advocates of restricting air travel argue that air flight have adverse impacts on environment such as releasing exhaust emission and burning a great amount of fuel which will make the world’s fuel running out of. From my point of view, restriction is not the optimal choice, instead we could produce environmentally-friendly and fuel efficient engine to curb harmful effects and take full advantage of air travel as well.
In conclusion, i am strongly against the view that the use of air travel should be limited because aviation brings us a large number of positive effects such as intercultural exchange and international tourism. And also an alternative measure should be taken to mitigate the disadvantages of travelling by air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28488372093 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23283000363 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59011627907 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4694474211 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30011165991 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105470108954 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594897530653 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163750766704 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065210688017 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.