People believe that not all school children have the natural ability to learn a new language. This means is not right to force all school children to study a foreign language. Do you agree or disagree ?
In the Present - time, Education plays vital role in every children life. Foreign language is also important for everyone. However, most of people think that all children cannot easily understand any foreign language. So, eduction institue should not force pupils to learn any foreign language. But, I totally disagree with this statement.
To commance with, Every pupils have ability to learn any language whether it is foreign lanuage or not. There are a lot of advantages of foreign language. So students should learn foreign language. if pupils learn foreign language, they will able to understand the foreign culture. They will boost up of their confidence level. they will rise our communication skills. For instance, On the basis of a survey dine by education department in 2018, in which they stated that 60% students able to improve our communication skills with the help of foreign language.
Furthermore, if puipls try to learn foreign lanuage, it will increase their brain power and learning power in children. If they go to abroad in work or higher study purpose, it will help to understnd the foreign culture, language and communicate to other people. For example, on the basis of survey in 2018, in which stated that 55% puipls easily complete the study in foreign nation because they know about the freign language.
In conclusion, Foreign language is important for every student so they must learn foreign language.It help to improve their personelity development.
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| 2019-11-12 | sandeep rani | 75 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: They
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23430962343 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64154508132 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2559106753 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25809008003 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101029045419 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667899234628 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173665471804 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651924804906 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.