People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the threshold of the new era, in uplift the number of people are concerned about tax-related problem. Many people have varying views with regard to whether it is a good idea for people to keep all money they earn or to pay tax to government. While some of those advocate the former, my view is that individuals should spend a part of money they earn on paying tax.
It is irrefutable is that paying tax has indeed several certain benefits. In this regard, taxes not only make a contribution to development of whole community but also enhance the citizens’ life, who pay tax as a duty. The higher profits they earn, the more taxes they have to pay for the state. As a result, authorities are able to have more revenue to spend in key fields such as education and health care services, which act as a precusor to a flourishing of whole society. Aside from that, paying taxes willingly is likely to curb inequality between social classes. If people keep all money rather than paying taxes, it would be inevitable for whole community to witness an income discrimination obviously, being a fundamental cause of negative affects in terms of financial and economic aspects. The typical example is the shortage of social infrastructure such as hospital or road systems. Accordingly, tax plays an vital role in today’s society.
Nevertheless, it is not to say that keeping they own money is unbeneficial for them. Those are able to spend their income on whatever they want, rehabilitating their own living standard. There exists, however,some underlying issues which put them at risk in the long run such as theft-related problems or lossing money when they suffer from financial risk.
IN conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I suppose that paying tax is a necessary duty of each individual and people should contribute a part of their own income to construct a better life. By doing so, the society operate effectively and efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90963855422 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88308872733 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4433082158 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364601705609 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112128463072 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890601914215 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211225729743 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829658407951 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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