People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transaction, without meeting other people face to face. what are the effects on induvidual and society as a whole?
Nowadays, by the cooperation of the modern technology,especially internet, people have been capable of carrying out daily tasks such as shopping, banking and checking in the hotel room without interaction with people. This advancement has both positive and negative sides.
To begin with, the life and the obligations of people are simplifyed through the technological development and people do not need to go out for several tasks such as shopping, banking anymore. For example, it is possible to buy new clothes, order delicious meals, money transfering from other account and even studying online courses without attending by the internet for people, just they need to type several buttons. This process helps people to save more valuable time and energy as well as this can create more convenient life.
There are also some drawbacks that the need of going out and talking with people such as customers and bank assisstants face to face is decreasing noticeably. First, the more people stay in without going special social places, the more the degree of getting fat or some diseases will be appeared. In additon, without getting along with people who work at the social places, people may be less outgoing and it has a significant influence on people negatively in some cases.
In conclusion, this development has remarkable help for people, however, this brings about some illnesses and may lead to a material life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18614718615 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81987367839 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9272053711 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.111111111 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223333665538 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930793056463 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070150343285 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116935884255 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796976959419 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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