People eat more and more processed food than they did in the past.
Why is this?
What are the effects of this ?
Nowadays people consume too much processed foods compared to many years ago. This has been attributed by advances in technology and it had resulted in increased health related disease conditions.
The 21st century is characterised by advances in technology which has an impact on food industry. Many foods are now being processed which used to be consumed raw in the past. Genetically modified foods are now the order of the day. For instance, long back, there was no tinned meat or pasteurized milk. The food items had all its nutrients organically, compared to nowadays, as some nutrients are removed during the processing period.
In addition, life expectancy is now reduced due to outbreak of cardiovascular conditions, diabetes mellitus and cancer which are related to consumption of processed foods. Junk food is now the order of the day, as people consume whatever readily available. For example, in Zimbabwe people used to eat organic meat and vegetables without high fat content, but now they are genetically modified with high level of fat which has caused outbreak of cardiovascular conditions due high cholesterol level in the body.
In conclusion, progression in technology has resulted in consumption of too many processed foods which is a hazard to health and cause early death due to food related illnesses and chemical poisons obtained during food processing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r of the day, as people consume whatever readily available. For example, in Zimba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32727272727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93779869239 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5853041912 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166223144523 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640370987957 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332117208752 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105778710775 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213344997541 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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