People have different views about homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.
There are various reasons why did the homeless appear. In enormous city, for example (India, China) there are can be more homelessness than homely people. For the reason that, they have a lot of breeding numbers, hence, the problem of people becoming homeless is increasing. Personally, I partly disagree with that assertion that homelessness is increasing by year in the world. To prevent this, performance should imposes a tax on all parents who with many children. If homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world, construction and purchase of lawless houses in the country will increase. It is no doubt true that the homelessness is incapable for government. For example if we take Indian consider, there are due to human population the number of ill people are increasing day by day in this country. Despite the negatives mentioned above the number of guaranteed and licensed doctors in India is increasing by year, outcome, medicine is getting rich. The benefits of homelessness is increasing should not be called into question, indeed useful for medicine and develop in some countries. In order for there to be egalitarian among the people, every homeless person should be provided with a jobs and government should aid them. Then they will be able to earn money and buy a new house as much as they want. In general, the appearance of the homeless can lead to displacement in the country because, after they do not find a home in their country, they move to another country for find a new home or flat. They should be provided with the necessary work and it should be ensured that they are working regularly because, they may not work because of drunkenness or laziness. This is negative for government.
In conclusion, every coins has two sides, so before a verdict I make sure that both advices are considered and I think all this is caused by unnecessary population growth hence the government must control every birth and ensure that there is enough space for it to live.
People have different views about homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.
There are various reasons why did the homeless appear. In enormous city, for example (India, China) there are can be more homelessness than homely people. For the reason that, they have a lot of breeding numbers, hence, the problem of people becoming homeless is increasing. Personally, I partly disagree with that assertion that homelessness is increasing by year in the world. To prevent this, performance should imposes a tax on all parents who with many children. If homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world, construction and purchase of lawless houses in the country will increase. It is no doubt true that the homelessness is incapable for government. For example if we take Indian consider, there are due to human population the number of ill people are increasing day by day in this country. Despite the negatives mentioned above the number of guaranteed and licensed doctors in India is increasing by year, outcome, medicine is getting rich. The benefits of homelessness is increasing should not be called into question, indeed useful for medicine and develop in some countries. In order for there to be egalitarian among the people, every homeless person should be provided with a jobs and government should aid them. Then they will be able to earn money and buy a new house as much as they want. In general, the appearance of the homeless can lead to displacement in the country because, after they do not find a home in their country, they move to another country for find a new home or flat. They should be provided with the necessary work and it should be ensured that they are working regularly because, they may not work because of drunkenness or laziness. This is negative for government.
In conclusion, every coins has two sides, so before a verdict I make sure that both advices are considered and I think all this is caused by unnecessary population growth hence the government must control every birth and ensure that there is enough space for it to live.
- Homelessness is increasing around the world 56
- Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace e g at home when travelling etc Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Homelessness is increasing around the world 73
- People have different views about homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world There are various reasons why did the homeless appear In enormous city for example India China there are can be more homelessness than homely people For the 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...ld. To prevent this, performance should imposes a tax on all parents who with many chil...
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Line 3, column 1003, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ting rich. The benefits of homelessness is increasing should not be called into qu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93521126761 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73438870154 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1064399429 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.058823529 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502401769435 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176692181309 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157724451017 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35346836822 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237985321249 0.056905535591 418% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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