People living in 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in previous era do you agree or disagree?
With the rise in modernization the man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in jungles to take first step on moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether the standard of living has been increased with the rise in modernization? I completely agree and shall explore the dimensions of the essay before shaping up my opinion at end.
to commence with, in this cutting edge society technological innovation has uplift the livinget standard of people. first and foremost, as compared to previous time today education sector has been improved a lot . because now smart classes are introduced as a part of study which provides audio and visual effects to students. thus improve the cognitive skills of children. as a quintessence, Delhi university conducted a survey which compares students studying with smart class and other, showed the students of smart class more intelligent than others.
In addition to this, today it is as easy as abc to communicate throughout the world which was not simple in past. people are enjoying fastest communication networks which make it possible to video chat, text messages, and audio calls in any part of world athere any time . so all these functions are provided by mobile phone which is the excellent gadget of technology. as a paragon, today millions of people communicate to each other in a single day just because of cell phones. likewise, in yesteryears ithe major problem for individuals was travelling, which now has booned due to technological advancements. as a consequence, manifold vehicle are today carrying masses from one place to another in a blink of eye. Such as cars, busses, train and especially airplane which are becoming popular due its many advantages.
to elucidate, manifold answers are provided to the topic. although, I believe that presently imagining our lives without technology is unfeasible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23364485981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96049383822 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641744548287 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5846085891 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4210526316 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923388710028 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232749738548 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302577225314 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521868090146 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010511680529 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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