People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Large cities are luxurios to stay along with it, People living there have to encounter many offences and bariers in daily activities.In most of the cities polution and high traffic are the major hinderance, so In my opinion the government should motivate individuals and provide facilities to move in suburbs.
The cities have lots of veichels, most of the cities in the world have a huge problem regarding traffic management, as well as it produces unwanted materials to the enviroment. It leads to the pollution of the cities, those factor have large effect in day to day activities. Along with this, delay in schedule for job, different airborn as well as water born diseases are growing. Though its not a problem that arises itself, human itself are developing and suffering. Massive crowd in cities makes people unwell, living in have excessive chance of being depressed. For example, in Dehli most of people are attempting sucide because of thier city life and the way of living they prefer, over 300,000,00 population relay ina city also it is too congested .
Though, the city life have lots of problems as well as joy, if the adminstaration doesn't push individulas to the rural areas they even cannot manage it well.An effective decisions regarding migartion from higher authority helps to balance urban as well as rural population. If people start to live in city than village population density won't be equal with an area.Developing universities, collages, hospitals and all infrastucture can change people mind towards migartion also providing extra facilities helps to twist mind about city life. The Regional towns should be more facilated than cities and some of the attractions should be developed their so that people want to stay.Australia even has changed his policies regarding immigration last year because of huge population density in cities like Sydney, Canbera, and Melbourn.
In conclusion, Inspite of problems like high traffic and pollution people people are living in cities because of facilities, Good reform form the government can change people way of living, So improving the facilities towards surbs town will attract people to stay there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77194068572 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6096530452 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.545454545 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8181818182 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38590330625 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1395040436 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744662863389 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246639697492 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263986939549 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.