Living in large cities, people are faced with too many challenges. This essay will discuss these problems and I think people should be encouraged to live in countryside.
Nowadays, living inhabitants in megacities, people face some serious problems. Firstly, getting stuck in traffic jam, the valuable time of people is wasted valuable time in itwhich can affect their behavior. For example, sadness and stress are two of the common behavioral changes which people have to deal with. Moreover, not only do city dwellers suffered from air pollution but also they are exposed to too much noise polution which can have devastating impact on their health causing breathing problems as well as nervesness. Additionally, due to the high costs of living such as high rents as well as food cost, people have to work hard in order to earn more money to pay for the increasing daily expenditures.
Encoraging people to move to small cities, goverments can provide a healthier and more suitable environment for residents. As a result of the reduction of population and traffic, the airpollution will dramatically decrease which will lead to a decrease in the number of health problems. Having said this, due to the migration the demand for housing will extremelly go down.Therefor, there will be more space for planting trees to clean the air benefiting not only the nature, but also those living in mega cities.
To conclude, having discussed the problems in mega cities and the results of encouraging migrants to move to little town, I am firmly of the opinion that the officials should take actions to reduce population in big cities to solve the problems mentioned above mainly environmental ones.
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- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity for instance in zoos Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11510791367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77356557721 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2341201926 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28867611024 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11586831333 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09072744406 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200264028972 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119806416524 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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