It is true that, in this contemporary era, most of the people are migrating small towns to metropolitan cities for a better job opportunities as well as health sector. However, the cost of living in big cities is being rose year after year. In addition, they face plethora of problems such as crime rate, pollution, traffic problem, cost of living and so on. According to my perspective, I personally introspect that government should take some important steps for motivating rural people and definately it would reduce the burden on the metropolitan cities.
To start with, people are having to face some problem in large cities. Firstly, pollution is being increased day by day because of traffic jam and this is the main problem in cities because you could not take fresh air. Secondly, more and more people are migrating so everything is being costly and due to unemployment heinous steps are being taken by some people like, kidnapping, robbery, murder etc. Thirdly, cost of living is also a major problem because land is much lesser as compared to people. For example, Delhi has registered in highly polluted city in all over the world. Moreover, most of the educated people are living in slum due to lack of home facilities.
Looking at the other side, government should start a different campaign for teaching those people who are living in rural areas that how to grow our business as well as how we can set up our own company here and should provide some incentives so when they would happy in their villages then would not move towards to large cites. Furthermore, when they would not move so it would help in reducing living cost, pollution etc in advance cities.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly people want to work in large cities and get good facilities it is good yet, we must understand that it is causing directly or indirectly on big cities like crime rate, pollution, living cost. That is why government should motivate them for living in rural areas and provide some good facilities there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...jor problem because land is much lesser as compared to people. For example, Delhi ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86086956522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58398928599 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.080274671 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292939771235 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103776860975 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529082127242 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177682053732 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398104015346 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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