People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regionasl towns?
In recent years, It is true that people who live in major cities have to Suffer from every day. Several problems have resulted from this tendency, However, I believe that the government should not motivate people to relocate to smaller regional areas.
On the one hand, there have been a number of problems that people in the big city have to deal with everyday life. Firstly, An increasing number of people are finding it hard to secure a job. This is because that labor resource is redundant, so the rate of unemployment tends to be higher than in the past. As a result, Many people could engage in criminal activities as a way of making a living. At the same time, crime rates have considerably increased in big cities, which can threaten living in these cities. Besides, The cost of living in urban areas is very high, so city dwellers have difficulty paying for house rents and utility bills. More importantly, Increased level of pollution has been a great reason for concern among residents of large cities. Owing to the high volume of everyday traffic, massive quantities of pollutants such as CO2 are constantly released into the atmosphere, causing the degradation of air quality.
In my opinion, The government should encourage city dwellers to move to smaller regional town. It will reduce the number of vehicles in cities, which will definitely improve the situation where air pollution are caused by traffic disturbs the lives of city residents. Moreover, A number of small are less developed due to the labor shortage. If more people move to these towns, it can meet the need of recruitment for many companies. In addition, The government should also invest more money in rural infrastructure and facilities in order to attract more people. Rural life is more peaceful than urban life meaning that it is more beneficial for people’s health and it is one of the most feasible to reduce the variation in respiratory diseases or even lung cancer.
In conclusion, air pollution, unemployment rates, and crime rates are the most serious problems facing citizens nowadays. I believe that relevant authorities should encourage people to relocate to other areas to have a happier life.
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regionasl towns? 56
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regionasl towns? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84242424242 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50278082255 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2816133414 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21853176624 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798716582871 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078290958236 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151381274675 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247013265603 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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