People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? Whay measures can you suggest to make it easier
These days, people appear to be less tolerant of the alterations in their lives. This phenomenon is correlated with numerous motivations which need to be eradicated by assertive measures.
There are several reasons why human often get trouble with getting familiar with novel circumstances in their lives. First and foremost, being accustomed to a new situation requires in-depth knowledge that people gains from long-term training programs. For example, to adapt an oversea life, immigrants must take the foreign languages course and get information about local traditions and customs from books, magazines or TV shows for a long time. People who have no knowledge of the nation they settle in may have difficulties in overcoming culture shock and integrating with indigenous citizens. Secondly, some situations happen suddenly, which makes people be unable to keep up. The reasonable instance for this view is the unpredictable appearance of novel Coronavirus infecting millions of people around the world, which collapses healthcare systems due to lacking of medical equipment and facilities.
However, some solutions can be taken into account to deal with this issue. Firstly, people need to equip knowledge about wide range of fields. Only by doing so can people address problems that they encounter in their lives or at least alert what they will face when they are out of their safe boundary. For example, if the citizens have some basic foundations about Coronavirus’ transmission, they will have method to protect themselves effectively from the infection. Another measure is that each individual need to ameliorate his or her problem-solving skills and have strong mindset. Consequently, these people may cope with the challenges without preparing. Indeed, human beings, nowadays, often be hindered by unforeseeable stumbling blocks such as epidemics, natural disaster which require an immediate countermeasures rather than well-prepared ones.
In conclusion, less adaptive lifestyle is attributable to numerous culprits. As far as I am concerned, people should apply aforementioned solutions to put the brakes this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be often
...paring. Indeed, human beings, nowadays, often be hindered by unforeseeable stumbling blo...
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Line 3, column 809, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'countermeasure'?
Suggestion: countermeasure
...ral disaster which require an immediate countermeasures rather than well-prepared ones. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64086687307 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0457788304 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659442724458 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6380528889 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172816805576 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518603588579 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320602850027 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977445781888 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246269730655 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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