It is often argued that individuals' styles on buying products progressively link with in accordance with peoples' age rather than any kinds of aspects. I completely agree that shopping style are not the same because of verity of interests of different aged people.
First of all I believe that as the period of existence is growing, the sense of option modifies year by year.Testing of elderly person can be old fashioned compared with young generation's certainly the reason is the period they were born. For instance , the former may like common and comfortable items while the latter tend to choose bright and fashionable objects. So main diversity in terms of purchasing products is the phase in which they born.
However, having dissimilar shopping style is connected with the another elements such as nationality and financial conditions. For example, an adult who is from low budged family has no any chance buying pretty inexpensive and poor quality product even though he or she wants to buy expensive and well conditioned one. Thus, it is interesting to note that other factors play a crucial role in terms of shopping habits.
By way of my conclusion, I once again reaffirmed my position that age group people have is the major factor in habits of shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0141509434 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73310414607 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712264150943 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.284287194 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200597265335 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735824341836 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576612257326 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115396223263 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581688502635 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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