People should look after their health as a duty for society, rather than personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a public concern that citizens should take care of their well-being as a social responsibility better than only for their own benefit. I believe that people should take good care of their health not only to create benefits but also to upgrade the lives of the citizens within their own countries.
On the one hand, many people claim that the secret to a happy life is through achieving and maintaining good health. Good health enables people to pursue their dreams and enjoy their life. Many people today suffer from chronic disease because they ignored their health problems when they were young. Therefore, It makes perfect sense that people take care of their health to benefit them personally by taking other activities, for example, playing sports, working, traveling, and a healthy diet.
However, people should not disregard the responsibility of taking care of one’s self for the society’s overall wellness. One reason is that an ill person may be a threat to the bigger population when the disease is highly contagious. For example, in Covid 19 pandemic, each person has to protect their health, others, and block the spread of them by wearing masks and washing hands carefully. In addition, unhealthy individuals can be a burden for society and put heavier pressure on the national budget. Let’s look at the spread of Covid 19 again, there are many people who suffer from disease and unemployment, so the budget which must be used as a subsidy for cure, social assistance is up to billion dollars. This pandemic also makes the economy certainly locked down.
In conclusion, taking care of health is not only undoubtedly needed for one’s own benefit, it also plays a vital role in ensuring the nation’s well-being. Therefore, each citizen has to take these responsibilities to maintain a healthy society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05610561056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65554570928 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9280846893 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268155033092 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978699135161 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608874401721 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166251811593 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596021381287 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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