people sleep less than they used to in the past.
what do you think is the reason behind this?
what are the effects on them?
People sleep fewer hours then they did many years ago. This is because people tend to work for longer hours compared to the past and this results in fatigue.
On the one hand, people tend to sleep compared to the past because they are expected to work more. This is because the job market is more competitive than ever before and workers have to get more done or they may fall behind or be replaced by someone else. This means that people have to get up early and do not returned home until late in the evening thus cutting into their sleep. Furthermore, they do not have time to relax and this disrupts their sleep pattern. For example, recent study showed that the average employee work 2.4 hours more than average workers in the 1970s.
On the other hand, the primary effect of this widespread chronic fatigue. That is to say large section of the population do not the required 8 hours and the result in high percentage of them being too tried to lives effectively. This could mean that they Underperform at work, are more irritable with those around them or could even have health problems. For example, the golden state warriors basketball team employed a sleep expert and the studied players who sleep for more than 9 hours a night and compared then with those that only got 6. Those that slept less had injuries and actually performed worse on the court.
In conclusion, people are more sleep deprived than in earlier generations due to longer working hours in the effect is that many are chronically tired to the point of exhaustion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'live'.
Suggestion: live
...h percentage of them being too tried to lives effectively. This could mean that they ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'warriors'' or 'warrior's'?
Suggestion: warriors'; warrior's
...problems. For example, the golden state warriors basketball team employed a sleep expert...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, may, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66058394161 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26103359037 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3723790986 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261018015762 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100582989933 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406223497284 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16614031505 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327090159949 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.