People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families, the society so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
Working hours have been in the center of controversy for a long period of time. It is said that long, continuous working hours can adversely influence workers themselves, put a strain on their families and even the community as a whole. From my point of view, I completely side with the above statement due to the following reasons.
To employees, the extension of working hours can pose some serious threats to not only their health but also the happiness of their families. First, spending more time at the office means sitting in your office chair and staring at the computer's screen for a long period of time. These lengthy periods of sedentary behaviour may be essential to get the job done but in fact they put workers’ physical health at great risk. It is indicated in some recent research that backache and shoulders pain are the most common problems faced by job holders. The rate of having heart disease also increases considerably because of overtime working. Not only physical health but employees’ mental health can also be affected negatively.
Second, stress and pressure which are the culprit of some problems with close relationships may find their ways to dominate worker’s life. If employees spend most of their day at the workplace, family and friends could feel deprived of their presence, love and affection. Also, usually work-related frustration can come out on loved ones, making relationships strained.
In addition, overtime working can actually put a hefty toll on productivity. Scientists have already shown that extensive working hours can never cultivate in efficiency but instead result in the low quality of work and higher rates of turnover. Consequently, employers need to spend a large amount of money and resources to retrain new employed workers which is time-wasting and money-consuming. To a nation in general, it has chronic impacts, preventing the optimization of resource and human capital.
In conclusion, in light of the aforementioned explanations, there should be restrictions on working hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...in the center of controversy for a long period of time. It is said that long, continuous worki...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ring at the computers screen for a long period of time. These lengthy periods of sedentary beh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24316109422 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94070395754 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1770232047 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.470588235 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25085386991 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810310603158 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896893338596 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157684531749 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639304784647 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.