The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
The level of overweight kids has altogether expanded as of late, particular in western culture. This pattern is putting these's national wellbeing in risk. My exposition will break down circumstances and end results of this issue.
There are a few reasons for this undesirable circumstance. To begin with, it is contended that the blast of junk food is fundamentally in charge of this issue. Fabricates, for example, McDonald's, Kentucky Fried Chicken and StarBucks , for purpose of benefit, have put an immense measure of cash in commercial to pull in client, particular youngsters. Ongoing reviews have demonstrated that around 33% of kids in western countries eat a normal of in excess of five kilograms of drive-thru food every year. Plus, the lacking of activities in kids is the second reason. With the growing strongly of PC, Internet, Smart telephone and other recreational gadgets, kids incline toward playing these to doing works out. Rather than playing sports or taking an interest in open air exercises, they like playing PC amusement or surfing facebook. Besides, guardians in present day life give careful consideration to their kids. On account of working throughout the day, they have no opportunity to get ready feast for youngsters, therefore they give them cash and let kids eat what they need.
This issue drives a few undesirable impacts. Initially, kids may endure some eating routine related ailments. Uncontrolled heftiness expands the danger of cardiovascular ailments, for example, heart assault and stroke. Not just this, extremely overweight youngsters frequently encounter tormenting from other kids, which may influence their emotional wellness. Plus, their day by day exercises are influenced because of their overweight body.
To sum things up, it is clear that there are a few reasons for corpulence among kids, and an assortment of negative impacts. Society must guarantee steps are taken to keep this issue from weakening furthe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3786407767 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8780268417 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656957928803 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4491404604 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4736842105 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081043243439 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027964954713 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297398794675 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607249918122 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274021621582 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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