The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation. The population of the world has rapidly increased in the last couple of decades.
Rising our planet's population is the biggest problem for humans.As per the stated notion,our planet's increasing population causes so many problems like in many parts of the world,people are facing shortage of water,food and fuel.In our coming future population is the biggest problem i can say.according to me there are so many steps taken by the people and the government as well. To begin with,earth's population is increasing day by day, there are multiple reasons due to which,population is increasing. The biggest problem is the lack of education.according to a survey by UNESCO,the population of the countries increasing dramatically,where a huge number of people are uneducated.For instance,India is the perfect example.In the rural parts of Bihar and Uttarpradesh,almost every couple have minimum 4 children.Moreover,the second reason of overpopulation is religious beliefs.some religions promote to marry a guy with more than two or three girls and because of this population is also increasing. so the growing population causes lack of water,food and fuel.Therefore, the aforementioned information validates my point that growing population cause lack of resources. Furthermore, this is the biggest problem for our future.As the resources are limited on our planet ,so according to some people this can be a root reason for world war 3.In an addition,in the future many people can migrate from one country to other because of the lack of resources.so these are the problems which can be happen in the future. In my opinion,it is the duty of both citizens and the government to fight against this problem but the role of the government is much more important than the citizens. according to me,the goverment should make some strict rules like,they can make a rule to give birth to only two children for every couple.For instance,in china, there is a strict rule by the government and because of this rule china's population is stopped increasing.Thereby it clearly state my point that how can the government make strict rules for the problem of over-population. In brief,the main problem for over-population is illiteracy and due to it many major problems can be happen like the wars.In my opinion, the government should make some strict actions against it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in brief, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28888888889 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49839469358 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.698460922 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.0 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245757007192 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120567157088 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670719370419 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245757007192 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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