Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be build instead? Do you agree or disagree?
Growing more trees and plants plays an indispensable part in the environment. While, a certain section of society opines that vacant areas of cities and towns should be used for planting trees. Others say that bare land can be used as building houses. In my opinion, I agree with the former view because of a number of favorable reasons. I will explain it further with the relevant examples.
The first reason to consider is that everyday population of every nation is increasing rapidly which causes the problem of air pollution. In other words, the air is getting polluted with swift speed. This is because every citizen use his or her vehicle to travel and they produce harmful gases such as Co2 and Methane. Therefore, if number of trees and plants can be increased on every vacant area, then they help to consume Co2 gas and generate more O2. For example, a survey conducted by the Guardian suggested that in 2015, Japan was most polluted country but after they use 50% of accommodation land for planting trees, it reduced to lease count in 2021. As a result, trees should be helpful in every aspect such as healthy lifestyle and clean air. Thus, it would be important to plant more trees.
Secondly, it would be imperative to tackle the problem of global warming, if trees start planting on free land. That is to say that increas4 in the earth temperature every day affect the melting of polar ice caps which in turn raising the sea levels and causing flood. Thus, to curb this menace, the only way is to grow trees and plants. Due to the fact that trees provide shade and which result in cooling of temperature. Furthermore, it also affects ecological balance as number of birds and animals are dependent on the trees for food and shelter and if they are not available for the sufficient needs of them, then they have to survive and some might get extinct. For instance, a report published by the Times of America suggested that Azalikara birdwas extincted from cities because they do not find trees to live.
In conclusion, I believe that accommodation can be tackle by introducing skyscrapers. However, serious issues need to be tackle early as global warming and air pollution. Therefore, trees and plans would be helpful to solve the problem.
Growing more trees and plants plays an indispensable part in the environment. While, a certain section of society opines that vacant areas of cities and towns should be used for planting trees. Others say that bare land can be used as building houses. In my opinion, I agree with the former view because of a number of favorable reasons. I will explain it further with the relevant examples.
The first reason to consider is that everyday population of every nation is increasing rapidly which causes the problem of air pollution. In other words, the air is getting polluted with swift speed. This is because every citizen use his or her vehicle to travel and they produce harmful gases such as Co2 and Methane. Therefore, if number of trees and plants can be increased on every vacant area, then they help to consume Co2 gas and generate more O2. For example, a survey conducted by the Guardian suggested that in 2015, Japan was most polluted country but after they use 50% of accommodation land for planting trees, it reduced to lease count in 2021. As a result, trees should be helpful in every aspect such as healthy lifestyle and clean air. Thus, it would be important to plant more trees.
Secondly, it would be imperative to tackle the problem of global warming, if trees start planting on free land. That is to say that increas4 in the earth temperature every day affect the melting of polar ice caps which in turn raising the sea levels and causing flood. Thus, to curb this menace, the only way is to grow trees and plants. Due to the fact that trees provide shade and which result in cooling of temperature. Furthermore, it also affects ecological balance as number of birds and animals are dependent on the trees for food and shelter and if they are not available for the sufficient needs of them, then they have to survive and some might get extinct. For instance, a report published by the Times of America suggested that Azalikara birdwas extincted from cities because they do not find trees to live.
In conclusion, I believe that accommodation can be tackle by introducing skyscrapers. However, serious issues need to be tackle early as global warming and air pollution. Therefore, trees and plans would be helpful to solve the problem.
- Planting trees is very important for the environment Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns while others say housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree Growing more trees and plants pl 73
- Planting trees is very important for the environment Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns while others say housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree Growing more trees and plants pl 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71099744246 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41743319014 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 391.0 20.2975951904 1926% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1842.0 106.682146367 1727% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 391.0 20.7667163134 1883% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 205.0 7.06120827912 2903% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42499259061 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.42499259061 0.084324248473 504% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265382205154 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11302500052 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 196.3 13.0946893788 1499% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -316.93 50.2224549098 -631% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 154.6 11.3001002004 1368% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.58 8.58950901804 309% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 158.4 10.1190380762 1565% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 155.0 10.7795591182 1438% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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