Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some that shopping bags, which are made from plastic, should be prohibited as they are one of the reason of land and sea pollution. In my opinion, banning plastic bags would be problematic for economy and environment, therefore, the governments should control production of plastic bags.
Plastic is cheapest material that is suitable for shopping bags and prohibition of them will bring many problems to whole world. Plastic bags became part of our lives because all our purchases wrapped into plastic. In addition, plastic bags can safe purchases from damages when they transported to long distances.
Another point to consider that all items which we buy should be wrapped and handed in bags and one possible solution is using paper bags. Furthermore, all our purchases will be wrapped in paper bags as a result manufacturers of paper bags will cut more and more trees. Consequently, the environment will suffer as trees is the one of the most valuable feature of our environment.
Finally, the best solution would be to control production of plastic bags by the state and make them expensive as a result people will not waste them. This is because only governments can control manufacturers through new laws and taxation. For example, in Uzbekistan this year the government introduced new law about plastic bags, according to law all shops should sell plastic bags for high price as a result people do not waste them
In conclusion, prohibition of plastic bags would be harmful for the environment as people will use more paper bags, having expensive plastic bags would be much better for the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the cheapest'.
Suggestion: is the cheapest
...ol production of plastic bags. Plastic is cheapest material that is suitable for shopping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04814814815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74804082849 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3329406238 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.909090909 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276044500935 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114680175251 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082341071454 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175150070554 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684241307667 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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