Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What is the cause and solution to solve this problem?
Environmental pollution has become a problem not only of a country, a region but a common concern of all mankind. Climate change - global warming, ozone layer depletion and acid rain, etc. The following are the causes of environmental pollution and the remedial measures.
Environmental pollution is caused by natural causes and by humans, but mainly by humans. Humans have increasingly affected the environment, the exploitation to the point of exhaustion of resources, the release of many toxins, makes the environment no longer able to regenerate itself. Water pollution due to domestic waste. Soil pollution due to agricultural activities. Air pollution due to emissions from industry and transportation activities.
Measures to overcome environmental pollution need to be implemented in the long run. The following are solutions to help protect the environment. First, plant lots of trees. Trees are the main source of oxygen for the atmosphere and a source of carbon dioxide, reducing soil and ecosystem erosion. Therefore, it is advisable to plant many trees around the house to enjoy the fresh air created by trees. Second, reduce the use of plastic bags. Plastic bags take hundreds or thousands of years to biodegrade, so they can exist in the environment and cause harm to humans as well as many living things. Therefore, it is recommended to use paper or leaves to pack the product instead of using this type of bag. Finally, recycle plastic waste. This is one of the most popular ways. In this way, we can take advantage of plastic waste to create new products that are useful in life. The reuse of recycled products will effectively clean the environment and reuse resources. There are also other solutions such as using clean energy, saving electricity.
In short, the environment is space, which directly affects life, and provides natural resources for human life. Because of that importance, it is a matter of survival for all of humanity, so we need to protect the environment to sustain our lives. With the current situation of environmental pollution, in order to protect the environment, it is necessary to help everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 878, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e new products that are useful in life. The reuse of recycled products will effectively c...
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Line 5, column 969, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...an the environment and reuse resources. There are also other solutions such as using clean energy, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19884726225 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98185599702 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556195965418 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9630592391 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4583333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232984887731 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611086026316 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741549920206 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141411774309 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824884201692 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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