Earth is the only planet in the solar system, which has liquid water on the surface and below the surface. Water is life for every living thing on this planet, without water there will be no life. A number of people are supremely concerned to conserve the environment, which is been depleted day by day in various forms, water pollution is one of them. In this essay, I would like to identify the causes of water pollution and propose some corresponding solutions.
A wide range of factors contributes to the fact that the major portion of the water is polluted by human activities. In the first place, different factors such as industrialization, urbanization, and major construction projects on rivers and seas create a tremendous amount of waste, which ultimately goes into the water. Further, lack of knowledge in the rural areas of developing countries also pollutes the water body due to improper water and wastewater management. In the second place, the oil container ships which travel across the world carrying oil, sometimes incidents occur and oil into the ocean is one more biggest cause of water pollution. Apparently, it can be seen in the form of global warming that human activities are so dangerous for the coming generation.
Moreover, as water is necessary for both humans and animals, polluted water when consumed affects the body adversely. In other words, pollution in a river or lake creates an ecological imbalance, and animals inside the river get affected. Finally, earth only has one percent of water which can be consumed, and by polluting that water humans are creating a situation where the coming generation will suffer.
In light of the aforesaid factors, I can say pollution creates a disbalance in the atmosphere and all the living creatures o the planet will have to suffer. Finally, to prevent such things, we as humans should take some serious actions in order to create a balance between life and nature
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'biggest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: biggest
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the biggest'.
Suggestion: more the biggest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, such as, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02153846154 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74709787695 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.258713071 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29378531777 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104622287096 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497862365279 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175675332913 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569764844891 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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