Polygamy means a practise of custom of having more than one wife at the same time. is this the key role behind rise in divorce rates. I will explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
The main point is that why people are following is that first and foremost behind is that marriage couple is not compatibility and some couples are forced to marry due to their parent under arrangement and afterwards they will face severe consequences as they are not getting along with each others sometimes due to opposite ways of thinking between them .As a result of this, this will become misunderstanding each other and cause into separation and finally even become depressed and seriously to commit crime, such as, the husband or person who are thinking of murder his wife . In order to tackle above this issue, the only solution to this is that , as nowadays , there are a several number of counselors or mediation center who can advise and tackle the situations in order to lesson the detrimental consequences.
A final reason for holding on my viewpoint this is that community rules and gender equality is very important. we should continually strive for gender equality. Some community are assumed that women are weaker than men. In my opinion, women`s physical abilities should not be viewed as inferior of that men. they suppress them and as a result of this most of their husband`s likely to overtake this opportunity, for instance, Muslim men are allowed to marry more than one women because of such communal traditions and rules, and hence, marriage couples are like a rope , the husbands are the one end of the rope and the other end is the wife, consequently , while in the center, the kids are placed. if any change in any direction of rope, children would get affected negatively, this is evidently not a sustainable solutions at all. They should be no compromise on these important aspects and they have to reply on themselves and need to adjust back between couple as long as a person has aptitude for his/her love , he or she should be able to adjust or get the effective solution between them.
In a nutshell, it is concluded from the above analysis that if parents are arranged for marriage , they will get easily misunderstanding and easy to get sensitive between couple as they have no patient .this is because of not truly love from their heart. Furthermore, women are weaker strength as their community perspective views , therefore, men are having affairs and wife at the same time. Given this situation, it is recommended that government should think about implementing this form of gender equality between couple and the better quality of mediation center who can tackle the issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89171974522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71775393055 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513800424628 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.145371598 49.4020404114 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.6 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.040270562189 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192140301528 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295823962903 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0319916433337 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272238123594 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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