The whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics every four years. The athletes participating put their best performance on display. Sporting events such as the Football World Cup and the Olympics have helped ease international tension, such as when powerful leaders were trying to control the world’s economy.
The Olympic Games are a great example that highlights how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. Ancient History saw Greeks and Romans interrupting battles to participate in the games. Even now, athletes from Palestine and Israel forget their differences, compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events can bring world attention to the terrible consequences of wars, putting pressure on leaders to try and reach agreements to end disputes.
Similarly, international sporting events have offered benefits in some Global South nations which live in constant internal civil war. For example, Brazil suffers a high unemployment rate, hunger, crime, lack of education, poverty, and corruption. This can be embarrassing and lead to low self-esteem.
However, during the Football World Cup festivities, the Brazilian squad, easily considered the best team in the world, invokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country’s people. Most individuals put aside their problems and worries, and even criminal activity decreases. Roads are painted in the national colours, people wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags.
In conclusion, popular sporting events play a decisive role in diminishing international tensions and invoking patriotic feelings.
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 56
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
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- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, similarly, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.764 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88478768716 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0368376762 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21730380577 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667037715263 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695326470564 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124322767816 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603833453627 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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