Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you degree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of popular events which are held around the world and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from enormous benefits of international sporting events in terms of the ability to solve international conflicts, popular events can be considered as a means of releasing patriotic feelings. In my mind, sporting events should be taken into consideration as an appropriate way to alleviate worldwide conflicts as well as showing patriotism.
Obviously, regular sporting events, such as the football World Cup which is held every four years, pave the way to put nations’ conflicts aside. For example, during the second world war, rivals in the battlefield decided to throw away their weapons and they played football together. It took place during Christmas days, and so at those days far fewer soldiers were killed. Hence, that part of battlefield had witnessed peaceful days thanks to sports.
Moreover, loads of weaker countries have the opportunity to manifest their strength by means of sporting occasions. Undoubtedly, it stems from their athletes’ patriotic feelings. As a tangible instance, so-called the God’s hand of Maradona, one of the most notorious football players, in 1986 World Cup, ended up to elevate Argentina’s populace patriotism. Winning the Cup by Argentina leaded to months of celebrations throughout the country. Thus, Argentinians not merely could elevate their nation-loving emotions, but also found a way to conquer England, whether it was solely in the tournament.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of naysayers. They are of the opinion that international sporting events would not contribute to such outcomes as easing tensions or releasing patriotic emotions. Instead, they elucidate that colossal budgets of popular events should be spent on much more urgent priorities, like elimination of poverty or hunger across the four corners of the globe.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on cons and pros of popular events and sporting occasions as well, I opt to support vigorously the idea that the merits of these types of events far outweigh downsides. Who can realize feelings of being a champion in Olympic Game? Of course, solely the gold medal winner alongside their country fellows!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, of course, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9317217269 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7822728625 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268537753183 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672313645087 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702438967255 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133465008013 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592077097997 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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