Popular events like football worldcup and other international sporting occasion are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way
Now a days sports play a very primitive role locally as well as internationally ,Howerver its worldwide shots tend to decrease the stress globally.Meanwhile it generate optimistic apporach for their home land.Although it is an undeniable fact that sports nit only maintain the body fitness but also develop the love for nation.
In preceding years , the games had been played just as a leisure activity to spend their free time and to make some body fitness which ultimately decrease their depression.Alternativly The contemporary situation varied from past its worldwide value is dramatically rising with the passage of time.
Actually in this modern era, every individual is suffering in the dilemma of different social problems.In this matter the mode of games little bit flip and people Arrange these games in abroad as it refreshens the body and mind.
Moreover, when someone practise to play emotionally for their country it could be very pleasant thought to give game to our country. Inspite of all these things international games not only for itself benefit but also generate the revenue for their national development.Im this matter govt should take steps to make sure the motivation in young adults and also give opportunities to show their skills. Media should also play its role to inspire the young generation in this regard.so that this international tension could be overcome.
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Improvement in health education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations However the govt of richer nations should take more responsbility for heloing poor nations in such areas To what extent you agree or disagree 61
- Popular events like football worldcup and other international sporting occasion are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way 56
- A few major languages are increasingly spoken in different countries while the usage of other is rapidly declining Is it a positive or negative development Give reason of your answer and include a relevant example from your own knowledge and experience 61
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet Discuss bith views and give your opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28251121076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12146483715 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9680122742 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.333333333 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675404035966 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037035224227 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032517803472 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360775105776 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361053094059 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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