In today's modern era, women have proved their abilities in every sector such as education and work. That is why, the grade of female in society has marked significantly in the last two decades. Besides, dues to absence of working married women at home, many jeopardies are faced by their kids. This essay partially agrees with this statement and further explain why.
It goes without saying that it is a dire need to work both of thoflife partners for making bright future of their children. It is also fact that when kids are alone at home or no one at home for taking care of them, they usually get attracted by unfavorable things. Furthermore, they forget values and respect to others. In addition to this, most of the time, they catches by criminal activies showing on TV and online crime that leads them to criminal behaviour. As a result, they start vexing by their love ones.
On the other side, nowadays, working parents are consious and aware about their toddlers' upbringing. Because of easy availabilty of creches in today's societies, they send their children there for taking care and even they can hire a nanny for betterment of kids. Moreover, nannies teach them moral values that help to become a successful person. All these expenditures of creches and on nannies, only can be afforded by working parents. Albeit, in the absent of parents, children have to do their al or some deeds or work by own and by doing their chores make them more independent and perfect day by day.
In a nutshell, it is all clear after explaintion that the solution lies in better parenting, work is not a factor which leads to adolescenes delinquency whereas in most of the cases, it is resulted by their unripe minds that are more prominent to criminal elements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'catch'
Suggestion: catch
...ddition to this, most of the time, they catches by criminal activies showing on TV and ...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oreover, nannies teach them moral values that help to become a successful person....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49969027087 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6269892736 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204179184444 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643403614028 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692131193216 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116838336862 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757864522548 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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