Ppeople are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less
In this day and age, Sugar-based beverages seem to become people’s eating habbit a lot.This matter is one of the rising issues in mordern society .It has two main reasons to be attributable to this trend and there are some possible solutions to it
The essential important factor contributing to increasing prospensity is that appetite.It has been an indispensable taste of modern life as a customary for so long time existing from parties, feasts to ceremonies and it is too ubiquitous so that we can spot all across the world.
Another important factor is hospitality as a social communication.You know, some people are not interested in savouring kind of sugar drinks but they have to be reluctant to make themselves pleasant to the host or friends.Furthermore People afraid that they will hurt their beloved ones.
For the aboved reasons, we have to make an effort to have a change of this habbit..In order to change it, it could not stop this practice suddenly which there a gradually reduction the amounts of sugar in assortment of beverages nowadays to take the place of sugar -free drinks.
In conclusion, it is of the utmost crucial to halt this trend as soon as possible.If not, it will surely lead to many health prolems and other diseases such as diabetes.And it is time people adopted healthier habbit .I strongly believe that whatever it is too more challenging, it can not be insurmountable in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9173553719 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0547896221 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.452427985 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.5 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175690827595 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934127544074 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345506340822 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819530261269 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502161463346 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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