People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
With the variety of beverages, people are having a tendency to consume sugar-rich drinks. this essay will discuss some reasons behind this trend and steps that can be taken to tackle the problem.
Many people have chosen sugar-based drinks instead of purified water for some reasons. Firstly, the beverage industry is spending more and more money on Advertising with wise strategy, so consumers are manipulated by the excessive advertisement about sugar-rich drinks. As a result, they tend to consume this kind of drink more. for instance, by conducting many advertising plans targeting specific age groups, Coca-Cola is the most prominent beverage in all ages, rapidly increasing recently. Secondly, citizens are living in the hustle and bustle of life with an overload of work. Therefore, they don't have enough time to prepare nutritious meals for themselves. This leads to the number of workers who order fast food and soda drink is more popular than ever. Gradually, not only change in eating habits, but also often abuse this kind of drink to boost energy quickly.
Action must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the adverse effects. The first effective approach is that higher taxes should be imposed by the government with the aim to reduce the amount of consuming sugar-rich drinks among citizens. In addition, The authority should launch more campaigns with positive messages so that customers will have universal cognition about the mental health problems associated with overusing high-level sugar in beverages. Besides, there should be more educational programs in order to encourage people to follow healthy dietary guidelines and lifestyles and also refrain from using sugar drinks.
In conclusion, the density of advertisements and the swamp with multiple jobs are two primary elements to distribute the rising trend in drinking sugar-based. Furthermore, there are some ways that can be tried to deal with the issue, helping individuals achieve high quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36624203822 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69140690771 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627388535032 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2913743857 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258696142227 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843041814284 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730485726533 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14362424794 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671646514115 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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