Social media has been impacted people in many ways since its development . I percept that media effects people positively and negatively. I am going to discuss its benefits and downsides.
Social media is being used by public at large level for various purposes such as for uploading pictures, to communicate with family and friends and endorsements and demonstrations etcetera . First of all, entire world has become a global village due to the progress of social media which make it easy to give any message to public as people upload any news or important messages on Facebook, Instagram, Twitter or other websites and these websites are used by everyone at present. Moreover, the news that are uploaded on these sites could be viral in seconds . Therefore, people prefer to use the media in today’s materialistic world. Secondly, the another big advantage of social media is that it provides justice to the by as media helps people to reach administration and government through broadcasting and internet posts.
- In many countries children are engaged with some kind of paid work Some people regard this completely wrong while others consider it as value able work experience important for learning and responsibilities Discuss both sides with your opinion
- In some nations old people are highly valued but in others young ones has more value Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion
- People are surrounded by advertising and there is an increasing effect on our lives Do you think positive effects outweigh the negative effects 84
- Do you think the advantages of travelling by car outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1696969697 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85827730454 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1571584951 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190970694072 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088962702305 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06822413463 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164972261951 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378129651463 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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