In some of the countries large proportion of population consists of youngsters .According to my opinion it has more merits than demerits .The following essay cover both the argument .
There are certainty several benefits of having more young adults as compared to the number of elderly people. To begin , with young people are more active and productive thus provide a better labour work force which can help industries in achieving their goals . Moreover , young adults are more healthy with implies less spending on health services .Younger people are ambitious. In India there are many talented youths who have desire to achieve success in their life and who can support India in developing . Young people can support in changing the thinking of society .
On the other hand there some drawbacks of having more number of younger people then elderly person . Firstly it can increase the competition among youth which can lead to unemployment in that country .For instance in India number of youth are not having job because of overpopulation and higher proportion of younger people . In addition younger people are more short tempered and impatient. On failing in getting success they may indulge in criminal activities whereas elder people are more experienced and they can guide youngsters in achieving their goals.
Thus I reiterate that having large percentage of younger population as compared to elder population in more advantages as youngsters are more energetic and productive than older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28870292887 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66546233739 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1987032013 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156012953358 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068991012118 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613514439868 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112060216282 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400176466174 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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