Nowadays, in some nations the number of teenager people are becoming increasingly higher as compared to the number of senior citizens. I personally opine that a larger proportion of young adults have more advantages for a country outstrio the demerits.
To commence with, the higher educated young population that a have a country is very beneficial dor faster development. First and foremost, the teenagers are more active and energetic. They can give the best for the production of jobs of the country. As they come with new fresh ideas. Secondly, educated young genaration is the best source for a nation because they are aware from all the rights and teenagers are not dependent on older people.Last but not least, the younger people have great ability to learn new things quickly which helps them to adapt themeselves to many changes in the world.
On the other hand,the older people could not be denied and they have already alone their part of reforming the nation. Moreover, senior citizens have vast experience and historical knowledge that are vital for the decision making positions. Apart from that, the tax they have paid this life made the progress of the country possible.
To encapsulate,older masses should not be a burden for the country whereas the young adults have more contribute to the society and the nation. This is why it is more beneficial for a community to have an active workforce than dependent senior citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6801741237 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.862229945 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147647796365 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557271971083 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537647858989 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995755058251 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646502313379 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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