At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young people compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation out-weight the disadvantage?
According to the statement, in some nations, there is number of young adults rather than older people in overall population. According to me, advantages out-weight the disadvantages in this criteria and reasons behind this are explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons which shows that large number of young people are more beneficial for the nations as compared to older people. First of all, in today's modern era, education system become more developed and large number of young people are more qualified and higher educated in different different fields in which they interested. Due to this, their knowledge become boost and also have extra knowledge. For instance, in today's era, many electric gadgets are invented by scientists which are qualified with better education. As a result, this leads to development of nation and become source of income. Moreover, more young people are working in MNCs and in large companies, in these companies, they will travel in foreign countries for the popularity and work of their company or MNCs which leads to development of their companies production. As a result, this will become development of the nation and economy of their country.
On contrary, there are few disadvantages which represents in case of large number of young masses. First of all, older people are more experienced than young adults. Because, old individuals have experience of their life of about number of years. Due to this, they manage all situations in better way and handle all the difficulties and problems easily without any perplex.
To conclude, according to my view of point, there are plethora of advantages than disadvantages which shows that young adults are more developed than older individuals.
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: different
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are more experienced than young adults. Because, old individuals have experience of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24028268551 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73339313404 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484098939929 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8761731998 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307185246612 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109591927054 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759998805892 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195052908128 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720723913187 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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