The first figure shows the percentage of the reasons why adults decided to study, while the second compare the percentage of how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Most of respondents, about 40 percent, said that interest in subject and to gain qualifications are the reasons why they want to study. Approximately 20 percent respondents’ reasons why decide to learn something are helpful for current job, to improve prospects of promotion and enjoy studying .Only a few of respondents, about 10 percent, think that to be able to change their jobs and to meet people are the reasons.
Unsurprisingly, respondents think that individual and employer course should be shared higher costs, approximately 40 percent, than taxpayer course.
Most of respondents think that they study for themselves but not to meet people or find a new job.
- The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. 56
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.Summarise the information by selecting and r 56
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the respondents') or simply say ''Most respondents''.
Suggestion: Most of the respondents; Most respondents
...of adult education should be shared. Most of respondents, about 40 percent, said that interest i...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rospects of promotion and enjoy studying .Only a few of respondents, about 10 perc...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Only
...spects of promotion and enjoy studying .Only a few of respondents, about 10 percent,...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the respondents') or simply say ''Most respondents''.
Suggestion: Most of the respondents; Most respondents
...y 40 percent, than taxpayer course. Most of respondents think that they study for themselves bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04237923812 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6510634097 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258987805812 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141782686806 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164858407734 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165270076759 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177191419353 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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