Nowadays, we are witnessing young generation population is higher than old generation some societies. This gap has some pros and cons. In my opinion, benefits of having a lot of new adults exceed than having old adults.
On the one hand, there are serious problems when you have youth population. The most and foremost need of young people is finding a proper job which makes a huge problem to government if they cannot prepare for them. For example, in our country with young population, we should prepare more than 1.9 billion job per year to response to young people job request and it seems far away. Second big problem is life requirement facilities like house, school and university, park and so on. These facilities need a lot of cost to be prepared and without scheduling resources, for example for country investment, it is impossible to ready them. Finally, when young people become older the cost of public health care system increases and people should pay more money like paying more tax to government.
Although there are some problems but always along with problems we have enormous benefits. When a society has a lot of young adults it has a fantastic power to reach high level of technologies and development. Young people always are source of ambition and creativity. This can help firms to achieve new methods to improve their society and change life styles. For example in our country each year we see a lot of innovation that help our lives be better. Another advantage is economy improvement which gain by increasing labor power and productivity. A country may flourish in building factories, extending agriculture and other things that help production better merchandise if it has enough labor power.
In conclusion, although there are a lot of trouble if a country has young people more than senior citizens but as whole I believe its gains prevail over its losses.
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour.Therefore working hours should be reduced.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
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- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this?What possible solutions can you suggest? 56
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the vie 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...old generation some societies. This gap have some pros and cons. In my opinion, bene...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
.... On the one hand, there are serious problem when you have youth population. The mos...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...our lives be better. Another advantages is economy improvement which gain by incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98746081505 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6845572106 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9428636196 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113023586573 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379031311903 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280182286051 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678067798099 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141810511122 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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