Nowadays, there are a lot of researches are done around the world. No doubt, the engine of development of each country is its researches. There is an argument that who should be responsible to manage and execute this engine, governments or private companies. I believe that it should be a cooperation between governments and firms in this subject but at final execution and management should be done by governments.
When governments handle a research we can gain a lot of benefits. Firstly, governments can find people needs based on country short or long-term plans. For example, they may have 5-year or 20-year plans for developing a part of economic and they should guide researches on the right way to reach goals. Secondly, some researches need a huge investment and no firms may handle it but governments can assign some part of their country resources to it. For example, new researches on human genes need about 200 billion dollars in each year and no company can handle this money but governments can do. Finally, some researches do not have acceptable income at the end but they may useful for our society. In most cases, private companies do not attract to this type of researches so government should be responsible for them.
To sum up, I believe that governments should executor and observer of scientific researches although they should use private companies’ power and guide them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ement should be done by governments. When governments handle a research we can ga...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs based" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'basing' or 'to be based'.
Suggestion: basing; to be based
...stly, governments can find people needs based on country short or long-term plans. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, no doubt, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88598258198 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.517894551 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251320735949 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102730029477 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744170969771 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190153174688 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252661431559 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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